Jan 14, 2010

Great Essay


I teach 4 essay writing classes and this week Olivia's essay takes the cake. Here is her essay, it is very good, but I want for you to read and see if you laugh out loud as I did at the end of paragraph two.

Internet is part of our Life

The Internet is the most important single development in the history of human communication since the invention of call waiting. –Dave Barry

I agree with this quote because the Internet is really important, and we cannot live without the Internet. Internet is effective because it is quick, can learn new facts, and it provides lots of information.

Internets can get me information that I need in few seconds. We just have to type a few words in the search box. When you need certain information, for example, a sloth, you can also try to find in a book about sloth. Then, you have to search for the book in the shelf and sit in the couch to pick information that you need. In my experience, that took about 30 minutes. I had to waste my precious 30 minutes to find some information about sloth. When you search for the information of sloth on the Internet, it doesn’t even take 10 minutes. You just go to Google and type “sloth”. Then, there will be a lot of information about it and you can print out about 3 pages. This way, by using the Internet, you can get a lot of information in a short time. It is catching two pigeons with one bean.

From the Internet, we can learn a lot of facts. There is always news from only a moment ago. In the Internet, we can read global news, too. We can interact globally, by using e-mail. When I go to Daum now, there are 4 main sections. There is News, Economy, Sports, and Entertainment. Each of the sections has various kinds of information. There are recent photos and article about it. We can learn from reading those articles in the Internet.

The internet, as we all know, provides lots and lots of information. There is everything ready in the Internet. All we have to do is use that information. There are a lot of fun and interesting sites in the Internet. We can use new programs and do various kinds of activities. This helps students develop in education. When we turn on the Internet for help, we can always get new ideas by large amounts of downloads and uploads.

Internets make our life much easier because, they are quick as a blink, has lots of information provided, and we can learn new things. I think that the Internet is the most important resource and they are always necessary to make us well-informed. “The Internet is the first thing that humanity has built that humanity doesn't understand, the largest experiment in anarchy that we have ever had. -Eric Schmidt

2 comments:

Cayce said...

wow, her writing is really impressive (and totally adorable)! i took four years of a foreign language and still wouldn't be able to write something that well!

golden zephyr said...

I agree! I've taken several years of Japanese and I just started Korean and would be embarrassed to try and write a meaningful essay!!

The "two pigeons one bean" sentence really did make me laugh out loud!! That is so adorable. I think I'm going to use it from now on!

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